Jasmine Hart

Poem 2: This is really fresh, Kylan. So different to what I usually read, and your imagery is very powerful. The flow is good. You start in an interesting fashion. ...

Poem 2: How are you so brilliant??? Your language is great and you express yourself well. This flows beautifully as a whole, and I love your imagery. You forgot the ...

Thanks Leja. I'll take a look at integrating the end better at some point. Thanks Kit,Sorry, it seems I was unclear...the ill subject of the poem isn't the father. I'll ...

Love it, especially; "watch their petals curl into deformity". I really like the tone of; "Even if I come every day with water - which I wont - ". I'm ...

Maybe they could try going home and he could try sending them back to their aunt's. I'm not sure whether or not he's up to something...certainly spliting them up makes ...

Thanks a mil dudes. I'll try Kit, but it's just so hard! Today's not the day for it, though. WEDNESDAY APRIL 2ND 2008 I haven't set one foot inside the ...

This is great, Kit. I'd just change the first line, as if it's only one manuscript, it should be "manuscript's", and I'm not sure about "gone dead", it sounds a ...

WARNING!: My poetry is a bit, um...terrible, at the moment, as I can't write my usual depressing poetry. TUESDAY APRIL 1ST 2008 The Shadows Of Memory I remember the lurid ...

I'm evil :) I just started one. Shockingly, it's in this forum under "Juniper Halls Discussion Thead" .(How inventive am I?)

Yup, I'm evil. :D JFW, there's no secret plan, the thing about me is that I am very bad at plot...if anyone has suggestions or questions or anything just post ...

I'm not sure whether I'll post my efforts...I tend not to post pieces until they've been rejected, so if I don't, I'll just do titles and wordcounts in my thread, ...

1) I've started a whole new rewrite of the novel, from a different perspective. I have 4447 words. I'll never finish it this year at this rate... 2)Still journaling every ...

I'm doing a poem a day this year anyway, so I'm totally up for this.

Briar As we got closer, I felt nearer to happiness than I had in days. As soon as Violet and Holly came into sight, Willow began to run. Laughing, I ...

Name= Tempest Garrick Age= 27 Elements= Earth and Air Appearance= Of average height, borderline heavy, greying black hair which reaches down to the middle of her back. She always wears ...